Mend my Broken HeartMend my broken heartMend my Broken Heart
Right now I am sitting here not in the best of moods, my mind keeps a thinking what should i do? You hate me today and love me tomorrow, deep down inside i feel nothing but sorrow. I’ve been true to you, but can you say the same? My life is empty, but who’s really to blame? You broke my heart, threw it on the ground, took the pieces and kicked them around. I think of the ways I’ve been hurt before, but I’m bruised and broken, and partially torn. Sew me back and show me the way, make things right and start a new day!
waiting for that dayI know you can't change who people are and what they say. Hopefully they will figure it out on their own somehow someday. People change so much, and they probably don't even know. But when your the one sitting around, all of these things seem to show. I just wish you could feel the pain that I feel inside. It probably would be to much for you and make maybe make you cry. The only one that I know who will truly be by my side. Is the one and only Jesus Christ. He will never leave me, or ignore me for another friend. He will always be with me and continuing to hold my hand. Well the sadwaiting for that day
feelings pour outAll of these writers inspire me. How they can put their feelings into words. I have lots on my mind, but don't know how to write it all down. I want so badly to go back in time and erase some things that were done. Unfortunetly life doesn't work that way, so therefore, I must go on. If only it were that simple to just put the things I cared so much for behind me. I would have done that long ago. If only I could realize what I have done wrong. Maybe it wasn't me, maybe it was you. The saying "things happen for a reason". I wonder to myself what is the "reason" for this happening in myfeelings pour out
waiting on youWhat are these feeling I hold inside. Wishing you were here to hold me tight. How will I ever know how you truly feel. Is this love, can this be real? Where does the line end between love and just being friends? Will you ever come around, or should I just move on? It's like a fairy tale, or wishing on a star. You want a happy ending, but all you can do is dream. Hoping that someday that you will be mine. I just hope i'm not wasting all my time. So what is the answer to what I should do? Should I keep waiting or just run from you?waiting on you
The Song of SorrowI used to hold your life so dear,The Song of Sorrow
But now all I can do is fear.
You used to say you loved me so,
Those empty words that just won't go.
I sing to you the song of sorrow,
A painful song of no tomorrow.
What's the point of asking why?
I just need to say goodbye.
As I walk I start to cry,
My tears illuminating the sky.
As anger starts to take its toll,
Roars of thunder begin to roll.
My body stops and begins to cave,
And falls to the ground marking my grave.
I sing to you the song of sorrow,
A painful song of no
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I feel so empty
So left behind and forgotten
Why would you leave me?
Why cant you stay?
the spirit inside of me has fled
the hope of memorys lost
the will to laugh gone
Lost in a pool of dispare and saddness
I cant find a way to your light
no way to sensual freedom(not satisfied with that line)
why would you cause me pain?
why would you leave me alone?
Im stuck in a dark room of tears
only me and my shadow...
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What can I say? The overall thought of your poems are good, but you must work on proper punctuation and polish them a little. I'm no English teacher... but that's what I think. If you work on them more, they'll be beautiful!
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